frozenm's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Jimmy's Tale(Path of Air)]

not even

i'm sure you got a nice mark, but this isn't a video, it's a powerpoint presentation

[Music Is An Epic Thing]

sorry

sorry, the music was nice, but altogether it was nothing special. (If you had written and composed the music and uploaded it as music, that might be a different story) In the end, it was just some particle flows and lights and spinning objects, not my idea of prime time entertainment.
Also for the guy below, there is a different between animation and music. If it's not about the visuals, there would be zero animation and zero newgrounds. Sorry bud.

[Nameless 6 Vol.3 Part 1/2]

10 10 10

need i say anything?

[Rush!!]

nope

your voice over was very drab and there was zero animation. Common, liven it up a little!

[FlashShorts #1]

dont like it

you can't take any credit for this flash.
You looped a song you didn't make and you spent 5 seconds putting together 5 frames which don't even flow together.

[Paper's edge]

here we go

I'm going to be critical because I think stuff that has potential needs a little criticism to make it better.
you obviously put a big amount of time and effort into this and it shows. Your animation improved as the movie progressed and you had a good concept of direction and use of medium
The major problem however was that I didn't gain anything from watching that except "huh, that was neat". Stick men are easy to animate, but everyone just uses them in the same way (either being thrown around or for fighting).
I would like to see you incorporate some sort of story or intention for your film. Also, there was almost no character from your stick man. The 'I like green better" was cute, but made no sense in regards to what happened in your film. If he didn't like the pink stickies, than show that. Show him getting frustrated or trying to escape, etc.
One last thing, it doesn't hurt to speed up the actual frame rate of your animation, for example when your dude slide down the skate park ramp, it happened very slowly. Speeding things up in such situations make the animation look smoother and more realistic
Hope that you don't take this in the wrong way. 10 scores feel good but they don't press you to improve or try new things.
Looking forward to seeing more from you.

stickbob123 responds:

Im am so cool with that. You had some dang good suggestions (maybe he'll get tired with green in the 2nd) i also want to point out that there was a slight storyline, but sadly it made the file size 5 mb over what it had to be. I make a flipbook, its not good, i leave and walk out, the stick figure escapes. But i can also concur with the frame rate suggestion. Reviews like this will make #2 friggin amazing

[Unintelligible Spheres 1]

good try

looping different splotches for mouths doesn't make it look like they're talking. My advice would to be look at some tutorials and tips on lip syncs.
Also, there wasn't much animation, arms bumping up and down doesn't count.
Also, it looks like you put a lot of time into the dialogue, except it was mostly nonsensical, there were no logical patterns and it didn't lead up to anything.

[Awesome Cracks Down]

ok ok alright

really good job on the style and animation, althought the story was bit confusing

[Hyperboy: Episode 5]

yeahyeahyeah

well I found the animation TOTALLY CRUSHING!!!!! (10), but the story was a little lame.

[naruto and hinata]

agreed

sorry, slide shows are against the rules

hunter-55 responds:

only if i dont interact with them i wrote text so it should be alright.