good enough pour moi
that is sketchy indeed!
good enough pour moi
that is sketchy indeed!
well, feel free to pour yourself some more moi. :3
5/10
needs some improvement on the animation and the sound quality wasn't the greatest, I couldn't understand some of it. I also wasn't sure what happened when he tripped over the vine, but the suspense was well envisioned.
You did have a good soundtrack and the story seemed well put together to lead up to future episodes.
Overall, for me, the sad story didn't make up for the animation and sound, but I would like to see future episodes.
Good review, I will try my best to make sure my future episodes are better quality and sound(need a better microphone) but the future episode will have much more and longer suspence and story.
nice work
strong background settings and beautiful art!
Just a few things to work on. For example at times the animation was very smooth and natural, and other times it was jerky and unatural.
Also, the direction could use some work in regards to scene composition, but overall, I thought it was very well done and a nice story. Good job! I would like to see more.
Thanks. Those are some valid points. I never really studied animation or art, so i just try to animate things the way i think is best, which sometimes results in not so professional animated movements. Especially in the fast action scenes. Scene compositions could sometimes also be better, but I guess that's just something you learn with experience.
I make stop motions!
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