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[The Suicide Competition 2]

here is a review for yiew

you had a funny concept and you brought it out pretty well also.

some things you did well
there was some good humour
it was neat how you added the health bars
you played out the competition pretty well

things you need to remember
cut the opening credits shorter (it's............ is read fast therefore doesn't need to be on the screen long)
stay consistent with your style, for example, the detail of the guns was out of place from the simplicity of the stick men and their surroundings
a couple of times I think you let your animation get sloppy

Overall, it was a good and unqiue watch, keep it up.

ABCreature responds:

Thank you

["A Slice of the Action"]

the terrible boyfriend

well done, but I think you went pretty ridiculous on the whole "surprize, it's a gory ending!" deal. Be careful not to overuse it.

[Chuck's New Tux!]

once again,

what can't you do!?

[Saturday Morning Watchmen]

amazing

if only we all could be this good

[ERROAR]

cool music

soooooooooooooo many super powers!

Wakman111 responds:

superman aint got nothin on this

[The Final Task]

seriously ?

"one of the most beautiful works of Flash ever..." whoever wrote that needs to eat a whole humble pie.
It was kinda just average for me. It was hard to see because it was so dark and it delivered everything that you would expect of a film described as "two jump in air, one dies". Not very original.
You did have nice composition and scene set up though and you used the contrasting red blood effectively.

[Red Riding Hood]

little red

for me, I felt like you were trying too hard storywise. There's only so much that you can do with Red Riding Hood in the first place, I think that it would have been better if you came up with your own unique fairy tale.

Also, I noticed that your animation was inconsistent which was distracting. Some scenes you put a lot of effort into and it really showed, while other scenes (walking scenes for example), there wasn't much animation to show. The sound quality was also kinda fuzzy, but the narration was well done.

Your artwork is fantastic, and the visuals to narration was done effectively. Some scenes could have been held longer though.

Good job all around.

[The Ultimate Showdown]

..............

wow, you are a creative one! Those were some lyrics (sound quality could have been a bit better, but hey! It was enjoyable)

This is what homemade flash should probably be all about

[Day in the Life - Cthulhu]

ok!!ko

Well, I guess that's what happens at 4:30 am! I thought it was pretty funny and I liked Dagon's voice.

Battosai810 responds:

Thanks :)
That's where my head's at after 20 something hours of consciousness.

[On The Moon (episode 15)]

liplipliplip

fantastic mouthmation!
I didn't quite understand the characters, but then again this is the first episode I've seen and it's episode 15. I'll have to go back and watch the others.