frozenm's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pencilmation #10]

you are great

the thing that makes these so great, is that every one you make, you clearly improve in skill and it shows. You also put a lot of work into these to make them top notch. Good job! You've got something rare.

[Joe Wilson's Day Out]

sorry

not funny after the 1st 'lies' but nice art work and the animation was ok

[dad shit he pants at woik]

NO EFFORT!

no animation, no story, no sound and no effort gets no stars!

[TF: Revenge of the Lolin']

well well well

I don't even think that you could downplay just how much trans2 really sucked! But you did a good job and it was actually more enjoyable than the actual movie.

kudos

[Rainbowball of Doom]

needs improvement

not much of a story and the pacing was really slow. Also watch your grammar! Bad grammar pretty much ruins a whole film and labels it 'not enough effort!"

other than that, you did have a nice idea and your artwork was interesting.

[Tarboy]

one of the best

animation was fantastic and brilliant, but I don't need to tell you that.

The only thing is that the story needed some work and the narrative needed some cleaning. For example you would use the same words over again. Ex "my BOY, his name is tar BOY" or "their slaves WORKED day and night, doing what? WORKING!" It just sounds too predictable or like you've heard it already.

Excellent job overall though

[Telefrancais collab]

i loved the skeletons

well most of it was useless, but for having the telefrancais theme song in there and letting me relive my childhood french classes. here's an 8

Bobert-Rob responds:

Well, uh, thanks! I think.

[Clockday Procrastinating]

what can I say?

anchor clock said it all. Why did you even submit this?

Anchor-Clock responds:

I already did.I submitted this one by mistake! I am AnchorClock.