frozenm's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[You Need A Health Bar!]

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Well...................the idea was there and had potential. The deal was that it wasn't punchy enough, the humour was dry and the voice acting was very drab. However, your animation was not that bad and your art style was decent.

[Waiting for the Bus 2]

nope

way to sell out.

[Press Start: Shoplifter]

good

Well, you certainly captured all the annoying deals with self checkouts, but I found that you went over the top on ridiculous. Also, there wasn't much animation to look at and some of the dialogue was drab.
Although, overall is was pretty watchable and humorous.

[Something On My Face]

nope

Well, I was impressed....until I read how you made it, then I was not very impressed, since you just screen-grabbed some particle renders :( and put it to music. Maybe if you added some of your own animation in (like a moving object/character that moves with the flow) it would be better.

Eammy responds:

aaah but this is my own animation completely. You are just rating on how much effort I put into it. You are biased. If I told you that I done it frame by frame, you would rate it differently.

And that makes an unfair review now, doesn't it?

I'm not lying to anyone. I like to be clever, and use tricks to get amazing results. You are not judging the results, but how I did it. This is not a proper review.

[James and the Chief 2]

sorry.

ummmmm, you tried and the animation was ok, but the script and plot were pretty mediocre. What was the whole deal with 'what's in the box,' it made no sense as to why they were bickering over it. Also, them being all emotional, while oblivious to choking the guy was really unoriginal too.
A for effort
N for no point

LazyMuffin responds:

NO DRAMATIC HUMOR!
WHATS IN THE BAAAAAAAAAAAAAX

Thanks.

[DBZ: Vegeta's Attire! 0.0]

hmmmmm,

I replayed it a few times and it's been confirmed. He says 'Why are you wearing a brar'

I think you captured the look and animation that you were going for though. Just improve on the clarity of the voices and you're set!

Trixen responds:

I do so many differetn voices, I guess my accent slipped -shrug-

thanks for the comment

[John of War]

you were trying to hard

Well, your score only comes from your clean artwork and the quality of the audio. The humor was forced and creativity was lacking however.

[Apple iPaper]

back to the drawing board

it looks like you put no effort into this. Take one look at your twitching characters.

Tell me why does one of their eyes move up and down? And I've never seen someone's nose shrink and expand when they talk. Do your eyebrows move and ears turn with every syllable you say? I've certainly never seen someone's arm go straight into their body! etc. etc. etc. Honestly!!!!

Also it was extremely long and boring!

[Larkmart - Emergency]

great!

good and funny, although I found it EXTREMELY ANNOYING that their eyes didn't look at each other.

aasimpy responds:

i think you're right in a couple shots. the funny thing is - the last 2 hours i spent working on this, i did mostly eye-line stuff. i guess i didn't finish the job.

[T E T R I S ' D Rising]

not even

Well, I think you've lost the point with these things. The first one was great, the following were ok and now when we come to this one, it kinda ruins it all. The animation/story and especially the theme of tetris were all lost in this one. When you make sequencing animations, your animation and style should only improve, not worsen or stay the same. You should always outlive expectations and not give disappointments.
I'm giving you zero and not ten, because a ten would be saying 'WOW, that was great! You couldn't have done any better.' My zero is saying 'I'm disappointed', there is no reason you should have come out with this one and I think you need to do a lot better.'