frozenm's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Alien]

needs improvement

Hate to sink your boat of compliments, but I don't think it was that great. The story was too random for my liking, and dropping the f-bomb like that was just lame, and there was no build up as to why the alien zapped the guy.
Also, the animation was pretty bad, the movements were awkward and sluggish and the way you choreographed was poor. For example, when the squirrel morphed back into the alien, the alien's head almost came off the frame.

On a lighter note, your art and the sound effects were alright.
Keep improving!

poprock responds:

1) Too random
Intentional
2) Lame use of the word fuck
Intentional
3) Awkward and sluggish movement of the alien
Intentional
4) Poorly choreographed camera angle
Intentional

Not everyone gets the joke that everything I do... is satire or parodistic of other flashes. The actionscript for the snow alone takes more flash knowledge than you ever will ever possess. Now go play with your clay, Zeppo.

On a lighter note, your momma wears snowpants to The Papal Basilica of Saint Peter.

[Explosive joking]

A plus

To the guy below me: Collabs suck!

It was great. Nice and short and actually decently animated for a change! (referring to 90% of the flashes on newgrounds that aren't)

Great job and use of old time sound effects and humour. The music could have matched a bit better though as a suggestion

SimonG responds:

:D
Thanks a bunch dude.

[Madness vs Thingthing]

more effort next time

Ok, first of all, there wasn't really a point to this, "two guys are equal rivals for a few minutes and then one eats the other." Good flashes have some sort of storyline. Maybe introducing why they are fighting or something will help. Also, the excessive use of the same sound effect over and over was pretty annoying, mix it up. Also, there wasn't much originality to it, dodging bullets and whatnot is old news.
Lastly, if you yourself are going to say "I think it sucks," than don't post it until you don't think it "sucks". Also, never say that you're too lazy to animate a scene, that doesn't say much about you. If you already worked hard on it, then you could have worked a little harder.

On the other hand, you did do a good job cutting it and nothing lagged on. Also your directing was pretty solid

[Marvel Collab]

wow...

that was pretty bad for a collab. Not one of them had decent animation and the part that especially ruined it was how one of them was stolen from Don Hetzfeld's genious "Rejected"

[sssstick fight!]

nice

To be honest, I wasn't tTHAT impressed given you've had 8 years of experience, but you've definitely improved a whole lot. Also, it's kinda neat to see a before and after piece. Keep it up

LazyMuffin responds:

I made it in an hour, it wasn't supposed to wow you.

[Tyler the Socialist Dog]

that was not even.

Sorry, but there was no point to this flash. The style had potential, but the so-so animation and the constant 'sliding' of the dog lowered its quality.
Also, the story didn't flow well as half the movie was just a dog running and all of a sudden he's running in the election and the constant f***ing demeaned it even more.
Furthermore, it wasn't even a witty play on the whole capitalist pig vs communist dog idea.

sorbitol responds:

You have been brainwashed. Seek help.

[Press Start: Familiar]

uuum

Well the voice acting was great.
The art and animation and story were ok, but it was not funny, in fact the excessive use and reliance on video game puns was almost unbearable.

[The Proper Way]

ok..

I think you were trying to squeeze too much into one short..Spread some of your ideas out more.
Also, the audio sounded not the best.

Although kudos for making it so fast.

Magical-Arts responds:

the sound worked fine when I tested it on my computer but when I uploaded it it somehow broke on the highest parts, no idea why

[Marshmallow Squad 5]

not even close

zero, and I don't think I need to explain why.

TheL1st responds:

i think you do, that being the point of a review and all

[Mario Gets High Again]

suggestion.

It was really really slow moving, but the audio was great.