frozenm's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[M3N - Episode 1]

nice job

well it was nice, timed well and short! However, the lip syn was off and I found the bouncing of each character when they spoke kinda annoying. Also, the comedy seemed like it came from some sitcom, not a flash.
Overall well done though, the artwork was good!

Shmeecherz responds:

I appreciate the compliment on the art, but sweetie...It's supposed to be like a sitcom :P

[Harvesting]

nice

well, I was going to ask if you intended to look Don Hertzfeldt-y, and then I read your description. Haha.
I think you captured his look, but not his style. Your animation also appeared sort of awkward at points (example spinning room, when the roots grab him, etc.)
Good job, but I think you have potential to put together a better story.

[Dia & Tofu : Episode One]

not interesting

that..........was..............pretty .............boring.
There wasn't any actual animation and the lip syn was very off, looks like you just rotated the mouth sequences and stopped it when the tofu paused.

Honestly though, you should only improve your animations every time you come out with something new, this addition to your work doesn't compliment you. It just says 'this is what I'm capable of and I can't do any more than tat'

[Man For All Seasons]

sorry my friend

K, well I didn't like it. The story was ok, but it's been done so many times before.
On a lesser note, I felt like there wasn't much effort in the artwork and clearly you were just copying Happy Tree Friends. Also, the animation was pretty poor and you didn't incorporate any sound effects.
Overall, this could have been executed a lot better.

UnrealCanine responds:

It's a music video. Obviously there wasn't sound effects

[Bugs 015]

nice job, what college?

good stuff, I liked how they just kept eating each other, the elephant at the end was too out of context though, it didn't even fit in with a 'random' ending either.

just remember to make sure that any props that you don't animate are firmly in place so that they don't move from frame to frame (i.e. the sticks)

015 responds:

xD sounds strange but we kinda had to include an elephant somewhere. the original concept came from another project where we had to design a book cover for an existing kids book about an elephant. the animation part was meant to be a small extra thing =P at least you could tell it was an elephant foot haha

& yeah next time i'll make sure to stick everything in place, somehow i never thought of that! cheers

[Sketchy Friends Dance 2]

love these and they're original

the guy below doesn't know anything.

TheBoogley responds:

actually, he's entitled to have an opinion, and so are you, therefore you are both correct... I guess :3

[The Faces Of Newgrounds]

good

It was a great idea and I liked it.
Although I understand that you tried to make the appearance of faces go along with the music, but it just didn't flow right for me.

Nice and simple though and that's what I liked most about it.

[Pencilmation #12]

stillllllll good

Hmmm, these are still good, but I'm loosing interest. Don't pump these out too fast! Focus on story!

[3rd Grade Transformers]

yep

5 bazillion times better than the actual waste of the movie that transformers was. You did an excellent job of highlighting all the main points.

[Team Fortress2- Fireworks]

nice

I don't understand what happened or what was supposed to happen? They were lighting fireworks in the middle of the desert because....the fireworks suddenly appeared from the opposite of where they were because....

Anyways, I liked your animation and expressions. Good job.